Monday, April 28, 2014

Edit motivation letter for student visa for France?

Edit motivation letter for student visa for France?
Dear Sir or Madam, I'm applying for a long term student visa for France. I am working for a German retail company. I enjoy the retail work but would like to acquire French language skills to work in the retail company's office. I would also like to explore working for a French retail company in my future. There are numerous French fashion companies I have an interest in. I would like to be involved in either marketing, merchandising or buying. My French language skills are at an early stage because I have been learning the language by myself. However, it is my heart's desire to learn French in France. Many sources suggest living in a foreign country is the best way to learn the language. Thank you for reviewing my application. Sincerely. Chris
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Madame, Monsieur, Je souhaite faire une demande de visa d'étudiant à long terme pour la France. Je travaille pour une entreprise allemande de vente au détail. J'aime travailler dans la vente au détail, mais j'aimerais acquérir plus de compétences concernant la langue française pour travailler dans un bureau d'une entreprise de vente au détail. J'aimerais aussi envisager de travailler pour une entreprise de vente au détail dans l'avenir. Il existe de nombreuses entreprises françaises de mode qui m'intéressent. J'aimerais travailler dans le marketing, le merchandising ou la vente (don't you mean "selling" instead of "buying"?) Mon niveau de français est faible car j'apprends cette langue de manière auto-didacte. Cependant je désire vivement apprendre le français en France. Beaucoup de sources suggèrent que vivre dans le pays est le meilleur moyen d'apprendre la langue. Je vous remercie de bien vouloir considérer ma demande. Veuillez, Madame, Monsieur, agréer l'expression de mes sentiments dévoués (= polite expression used in French and necessary to end such a letter)

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Monday, April 14, 2014

Do you think the motivation letter for student visa of France is good enough?

Do you think the motivation letter for student visa of France is good enough?
Dear Sir or Madam, I'm applying for a long term student visa for France. I am working for a German retail company. I enjoy the retail work but would like to acquire French language skills to work in the retail company's office. I would also like to explore working for a French retail company in my future. There are numerous French fashion companies I have an interest in. I would like to be involved in either marketing, merchandising or buying. My French language skills are at an early stage because I have been learning the language by myself. However, it is my heart's desire to learn French in France. Many sources suggest living in a foreign country is the best way to learn the language. Thank you for reviewing my application. Sincerely. Chris
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Monday, April 7, 2014

i am a senior student in high school in california i want to graduate high school in france is that possible?

i am a senior student in high school in california i want to graduate high school in france is that possible?
i want to graduate in france so i just want to know if its possible for me living here in california transfer to a school in france and graduate their.
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its probably possible , try to find a organization to help like goabroad.com or something similar . High school in France is a little different from the US and you might found it a little harder ,specialy if you wanna get good grade. I would advice to email the ambassy of France to see if you can get infos about it.
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To graduate from a high school in France means that you will need to pass the baccaleureat. If you move to France you will probably need to do the last two years (unless you can work something out) since the bac is a test that is taken over the last two years of high school similar to AP tests they're pretty intense compared to American high schools. You will also need to choose a path to get your bac in (litterature, economics, math, etc.) Good luck I think it would be a great experience.
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There are also a bunch of American and International schools located all over France, although most are concentrated in big, international cities such as Paris, Nice, Lyon, etc. If you're a senior I would not recommend taking the French Baccalaureate, which takes at least two years to prepare. International schools cater for expats, and usually have the equivalent of the country of origin's examination system or syllabus - for example, a normal US high school degree or the possibility to take the Advanced Placement (AP) test. The downside: international schools are very expensive as they are not government-sponsord. To find out more, check out the site of the European Council of International Schools.

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Tuesday, April 1, 2014

Could anyone edit this motivation letter for student visa in France?

Could anyone edit this motivation letter for student visa in France?
I'm applying for a long term (over six months) student VISA in France and need to write a motivation letter for the French Embassy in my country. I don't know what else to write so will be very glad if you could give me some hints. Thank you very much! "I'm applying for a long term student visa of France. I am working for a German retail company. I enjoy the retail work but would like to gain the French language skill for working in the retail company's office. I also would like to work for a French retail company in my future. There are so many French fashion companies that I am interested to work for. I would like to do marketing, merchandising or buying. I am a complete beginner at French language but I know that it is the best thing to learn the language in the country. I am learning French by myself until the day I leave to France but also I am assuming that nothing is better than learning French in France. I would like you to give me the visa. Thank you. Chris"
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Eh I prettified it a bit, probably still mistakes in it though. One thing I would say is not to start every sentence with 'I' and also not to end a letter with 'GIVE ME THE VISA', it's considered rude. To Whom It May Concern My name is Chris and I am applying for a long term student visa of France. As of now, I am working for a German retail company. I enjoy the retail work but I would also like to gain the French language skill as to further myself in the retail business. My dream is to work for a French retail company in the near future. There are so many French fashion companies that I am interested to work for. Especially marketing, merchandising and buying interest me. My current level skill for French is that of a novice. I have been told that the best way to learn French is immersion, to completely surround myself with French speaking people as to further my skill. I am currently leaning French on my own, until the day I leave for France. However, I would prefer to study French in France as there is no better school than that. Thank you for reviewing my request Chris
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You should probably apply to a school, as they will not accept you without some sort of sponsorship. Wenn Sie richtig sehr gut Deutsch kennen, würde ich auch irgendwo dazu schreiben. ================================================= Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Chris X and I am applying for a long term student visa for France in order to complete my studies in X. (You can tailor it here, such as French language, or French lit classes, etc. I would probably say liek my French studies at ABC Ecole/School.) As of now, I am working for a XXX, a German retail company. I enjoy retail work and heave learnt a great deal from it, such as X skill, Y skill, and Z skill, but I would also like to further my knowledge of the retail industry by gaining further ground as to acquire and refine my French language abilities. My dream is to work for a French retail company in the near future. There are so many French fashion companies that I am interested to work for. Especially marketing, merchandising and buying interest me. My current level skill for French is that of a novice, having studied for X time with various materials and lessons. (Are you a cmplete novice? Have you studied a bit? If so, I would mentioned it and where.) I have been told that the best way to learn a language is total immersion, completely surrounding myself with French speaking people as to further my skill. One of th reasons that I would prefer to study at ABC school is because of the excellent quality of instructors as well as the performance of its graduates. I feel that with ym dedication to learn the language of Rousseau, de Gaulle, and Voltaire, I assure you that I am open to broadening my horizons both linguistically and culturally. Following completion of my language studies, I wish to pursue either an internship in France or a Francophone country, or return to my retail career. Thank you for reviewing my application. Sincerely, Chris

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